Could use some critique on this one

[Sprutnums]

The Idea of the map, is this lore <- long story - Short story -> Dwafs were banished from their home, should find another place to live. Settled here.

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This is the first city map i have ever attempted, but as a stubborn perfectionist i would like it to be as awesome as possible.

[Knightbanez]

Hi Sprutnums! Being a new user, I might not have much weight behind my words but I like the idea of this city so far. The idea of it being built in what I'd assume is a mountain pass is cool. Also, is part of it built into the mountain in the north section? For a first time, you're doing a lot better than me with city maps! Keep it up and I hope someone can give you some good criticism!

[Chick]

Nice start, build some more. I am guessing that tan is city, green is land, and grey is underground, so hopefully once you have more structure, that will be clearer. That will help visualize where you are headed.