July 2018 Challenge : Somewhere on South Crystalfane Avenue

[fol2dol]

Hi,
Let's try something different for me, a street

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[ChickPea]

Love the perspective you've chosen. Looking forward to seeing this one develop.

[fol2dol]

Oooh, it looks like a more dramatic version of the village where I used to live when I was a teenager ! The first house in the left should be a bakery
(The baker of the village would have a place in a fantasy novel, such a character ! We lived there for 10 years and he never accepted to sell us anything because we were "new" in the village. "No bread", he told with a gravelly voice, standing behind his counter, arms crossed, with rows and rows of fresh bread behind... haha, I was so scared ! ^^).
'cant wait to see it finished !

Excellent! What a rude baker it was
I don't know if I'll put a bakery but I'm sure there will be some shops and signboards!!

Love the perspective you've chosen. Looking forward to seeing this one develop.

Thanks ChickPea.

[MistyBeee]

Oooh, it looks like a more dramatic version of the village where I used to live when I was a teenager ! The first house in the left should be a bakery
(The baker of the village would have a place in a fantasy novel, such a character ! We lived there for 10 years and he never accepted to sell us anything because we were "new" in the village. "No bread", he told with a gravelly voice, standing behind his counter, arms crossed, with rows and rows of fresh bread behind... haha, I was so scared ! ^^).
'cant wait to see it finished !

[fol2dol]

Finally the first shop is a cartographer's one

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[fol2dol]

I straightened the tower roof, added some life and an inn to welcome the numerous adventurers passing by Bewold.
I'd like to have feedbacks, especially for the colors

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[Diamond]

I like the colors so far - feels like its sunset, and the lights are just starting to come on in the shops.

And I see you drew me panhandling for change!

[fol2dol]

Nice one Robin, very BD-esque ! You're getting real good with procreate. May I ask if you plan on making it more mappy ?

The twilight/dusk effect is good but a bit too vertical, maybe add darker colors in the upper part ?

I'll try to improve the dusk background, thanks for the feedback Tom!
And if I have some time left, I'll try to add a map somewhere

Can I cast my vote already? I'm really loving how this map is going.

Thanks

This is going to tell a great story when it's done fol2dol, really liking where you're going with this.

Thanks Adfor

I like the colors so far - feels like its sunset, and the lights are just starting to come on in the shops.

And I see you drew me panhandling for change!

Nice try Diamond, but you ain't fooling me with your disguise. I know you're spying for the opponent thieve's guild

[Adfor]

This is going to tell a great story when it's done fol2dol, really liking where you're going with this.

[QED42]

Can I cast my vote already? I'm really loving how this map is going.