I could use some feed back on this map :)

[Sprutnums]

city of guntul .jpg

Hi guys im currently working on the lore of dota2, MY VERSION thats is. i could use some feedback though.

If youre interested you have the chance to follow my work on Twitch.tv just follow this link

[CaptainJohnHawk]

This is really starting to come together! I saw your previous post with the earliest stage of this map.

Pros: Strong layout, great color choices, nice hand-drawn feel

Cons: I feel Interior of the city is colored and styled, slightly different from the exterior.
The rock texture looks a little strange. I think once you apply texture to more areas it will mesh better.

Personal Choices: It feels like an old map someone had crumpled up in the pocket a long time ago. The rock texture reminds me more of paper imperfections and less so of a texture for the stone. Maybe make the rock coloration more "free" like the grass is colored, or create those sharp edges across more portions of the map and create a "wrinkled" feel.

Overall awesome map, I am very excited to see its development