Hello friends, newbie member here. Hope this is the right place to post.

I have solid illustration bases, but very little knowledge in actual cartography. This is not the first map I make, but rather the first one I try to do properly.

Could you give me some tips and feedback on what I have so far? I feel a little lost, and I would appreciate some experienced guidance.

Thank you in advance.

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