The Islands of Oblivion

[jort]

Hi everyone,

This is my first map. I followed the overland tutorial for cc3 as provided on the product site. Please let me know what you think.
Islands of Oblivion.JPG

[Aval Penworth]

Looks like a nice map debut. Have some guild reputation for your first map post. A larger version will probably get you more feedback though.

[Rythal]

For a CC3 map, I think it looks great!

maybe change the light brown city font to something darker, and get rid of the red glow behind the title; maybe replace it with an ink black glow. basically all your font colours could do with some work, but the map itself looks very good!

oh, and larger map plz!

[Ghostman]

Rather than running into the sea, the rivers seem to stop just short of the coastline.

[jort]

Thanks for your replies. I've created a new map (see new thread: The Kingdom of Loria) bearing your suggestions in mind.