The Isle-state of Ceyron

[Janston]

Janston here,

I hope you're all doin' well. Attached to this post is my first finished work after learning some new tricks on the ol' YouTube. I owe it all to RPGMapMaker, Ascension and Kindari for the knowledge that they were willing to share publicly.

Anywhoo...

Several years ago I set out to build a world of my own as a means of generating characters, locations and storylines for the games that I design. (I mainly design table top games nowadays, but have previously worked in the videogame industry). This map is of Ceyron, a sub-continental mass to the West of the continent of Vensai, the first setting I intend to finish. I am planning taking a small chunk of this map and trying my hand at city-level works next, but first I'd love it if the guild ruthlessly criticized this before I move on.

Thank you in advance for having a look.

Have a great day!

[arsheesh]

Hi there Janston, congrats on you first finished work (post tutorials anyway)! Colors are and textures are good. I think you might have some issues with some of your rivers though. From what I understand, delta's aside rivers flowing down-hill merge together, they don't break apart (there are some exceptions, such as a river temporarily splitting apart to flow on either side of a small island before merging back together). But overall a nice first map.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[Janston]

Thank you for the feedback, Arsheesh.

I'm glad you brought up the rivers, as I was second and third guessing them. I have them on their own layer, so I'll be able to revise them with the quickness. I'll give it another pass and post an update.


Thanks again!

[Janston]

Thank you for the feedback, Arsheesh. I appreciate it greatly.

I am glad you brought up the rivers. Prior to posting Ceyron, I was second guessing them along with the mountains and snow details. I have the rivers on their own layer and will have another go at it. I'll post an update once I finish.


Thanks again! I'm thrilled to be posting here.

[darcycardinal]

Janston here,

I hope you're all doin' well. Attached to this post is my first finished work after learning some new tricks on the ol' YouTube. I owe it all to RPGMapMaker, Ascension and Kindari for the knowledge that they were willing to share publicly.

Anywhoo...

Several years ago I set out to build a world of my own as a means of generating characters, locations and storylines for the games that I design. (I mainly design table top games nowadays, but have previously worked in the videogame industry). This map is of Ceyron, a sub-continental mass to the West of the continent of Vensai, the first setting I intend to finish. I am planning taking a small chunk of this map and trying my hand at city-level works next, but first I'd love it if the guild ruthlessly criticized this before I move on.

Thank you in advance for having a look.

Have a great day!

Good work Janston, clear and crisp. Will be following this project further, as working on city level is fun.

-darcycardinal