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    Sometimes we have that Challenge, THAT customer. Which requires things you can't even describe, and the work results something as a mix of things.

    Of course I wanted just to share a work i made some time ago and I wonder about what you think could've make this better.

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    It's certainly different, but I think it looks fantastic! I can't really say if it could be improved in some way, I just find myself really enjoying looking at it. Extremely cool!
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    Hehe, that customer... ^^
    What you did there is splendid, Ren. I love the colors, and your clods and water are fantastic. Maybe the sand island may need a few more work, it looks a little rough if compared to the fire one for example, but I'm picky there

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    I like the colors and the islands but I am having trouble choosing where to zone out and view the image from afar. It seems so chaotic, which I guess was the point. Everything seems to be happening everywhere. Nice job!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kellerica View Post
    It's certainly different, but I think it looks fantastic! I can't really say if it could be improved in some way, I just find myself really enjoying looking at it. Extremely cool!
    Idk. The request was in this canvas size, to have a multiverse of floating lands with very different but clear bioma and also unreal (like donuts and stuff) but the first sketch became like a chaos as I couldn't fit 39 islands in top view as requested and I couldn't play as I wanted. This is why this sketch stay as a failure for me and I wanted to take a new chance on this work as soon as I could create a new vision in my mind.

    Quote Originally Posted by MistyBeee View Post
    Hehe, that customer... ^^
    What you did there is splendid, Ren. I love the colors, and your clods and water are fantastic. Maybe the sand island may need a few more work, it looks a little rough if compared to the fire one for example, but I'm picky there
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    I perfectly agree. It doesn't only show as out of scale, it is like some islands are not "intercting" eachother

    Quote Originally Posted by Arimel View Post
    I like the colors and the islands but I am having trouble choosing where to zone out and view the image from afar. It seems so chaotic, which I guess was the point. Everything seems to be happening everywhere. Nice job!
    I said above what what the first request. It was too insane to fit the canvas size and the budget.Is that kind of customer which started with a request and added things after, so i found a meeting point but I was really frustrated.

    Today, I'd like to take this map for me and improve it painting on it a new vision. I guess I wanted to have different point of views from more exeprt users, just to make clear in my mind where to start from!


    Thank you guys

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    Some kind of dreamlands or planes representation. I like it, very original!

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