Map 09 - Chor'Tah (The Savage Lands)

[arsheesh]

Great work on all the hand drawn elements Savage Orc. Personally I'm not to big of a fan of laying down that flat brown color for bordering countries though. It's sort of distracting. Perhaps a lighter shade would work better.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[Falconius]

Looks good. And Orca'traz had me laughing

[snodsy]

Love your drawing a whole lot, one of my favorites. The black on the shield starts to get a little lost, not sure of the brown background for the other lands, as others have stated, maybe a little closer to your land color might work better?. The Guld World Map.com type too big?. Chor'tah right in the center, bold maybe a little too heavy? Do you need it, if the whole country is Chor'Tah as your shield notes? Redo the scale to fit with your other text.

[Savage Orc]

Thanks for your comments, snodsy. I will try to make some changes, I already changed the color of the surrounding lands but have not posted it yet. I put Chor'Tah on the map itself for the composite map where the shield, etc...will be cut off. But if you don't think it is needed I can get rid of it.

Hopefully I will have some time tomorrow so I can work on it.

[Savage Orc]

### Latest WIP ###
Map 09 - Chor'Tah Savage Lands v2.jpg

Made a few changes as suggested. Altered the map scale to match the map better (can't believe I forgot that). Got rid of the country name from the middle of the map. reduced the size of the Guild Map/.com text at the bottom left. And changed the color of the surrounding countries (was only a duplicate layer set to multiply masked to only darken the other countries so was an easy fix to lighten it). Hope it looks better.


Any other comments, suggestions, critiques welcome.

[snodsy]

Yeah, I like all the changes! The outline on the fist looks great. Now I can see that awesome drawing

[Bogie]

Great map, nicely put together.