October Entry: Risky Business

[shantedracule]

Ok so this will unfortunanatly have to be the last update for the comp. I have to go to the armory tomorrow and probaly will not be back until after the deadline. Any who here it is you'll see that I played with stuff alot and came out with this.

Wanted to draw the eyes to the map itself a little bit so geospacial emphasis was laced by centering it. Added in some artistic things to give mor Ambiance to the map. Worked with the perspective of the Accretion Overlay. Fixed alot of places that where talking about the same race with different names.

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[Coyotemax]

Oh yes. Nice job on the hazard zone, throwing the perspective in there really makes it stand out in a good way.

I'm liking this one..

[rdanhenry]

Angling the hazard stripes did even more to improve it than I'd have expected. I also think you made a good decision in moving the map to the center. It made it more central and you have a much more balanced composition now. Still some spelling issues, which don't pass quite so easily as they would on a "hand-drawn map", but I don't think you'll be judged down on that basis. If you decide to keep working on it after the challenge, I'd be willing to go over it carefully and help you get it letter perfect.

Good work!