Hi there, I have only just joined the wonderful guild that is, but was wondering if anyone had any opinions on my dissertation proposal?

http://www.mediafire.com/?m1edzhhzxor

The part in red has been added to satisfy my tutor.

Any feedback would be greatly recieved as I am just teetering on the edge of writing it - as well as any links to any sites that may be helpful. I will post up some more of my work later this week.

Thank you in advance

Gavin