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    Guild Artisan Aval Penworth's Avatar
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    Thanks for the advice DJ, which follows on from the previous comments. What you have made me realise though is that I really need a point of interest about two thirds of the way up the image. Ideally it would also be two thirds of the way to the right as well to balance the castle & rock, bottom left. But the river is there. So I will have to come in a bit.

    I think that I need to put a big important building, with a light coloured roof in the center of town. Remove that gray boulder which I now realise is too heavy. I also need to remove those big U-shaped buildings and replace them with smaller inobtrusive houses.

    Darkening the grass and pages will also help the town to pop. Cool. Thanks again DJ, Jt & SG

    PS. @ DJ I think I will wait until after the challenge finishes, before asking you to send me your version
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