Very good. it expands on some of the points that I had outlined. I especially like the change the cup undergoes if it is held by a "non king" I think if we go with the history that I wrote then we would have to come up with an explanation as to why the cup can be held by people other than the first king's descendants. Maybe it could be that the god no longer cares who holds the cup so long as they can be called king (it might be that the god has had an alignment shift and now see's the yearly offering as a game. An orc holding the cup would be of great entertainment to her in this case).