Quote Originally Posted by Moe View Post
I like it - the light 'wave lines' go pretty well with the water colour and add a certain fow.
I would add a lil bit of shading behind the waterfall due to the cliff's edge being not parallel as well as some spray clouds would be an improvment.
yea.. I had planned a bit on the former.. just have not gotten around to it.... will try to remember the latter...


Quote Originally Posted by Moe View Post
And I am not sure about the outlet - shouldn't its width be greater than the upper parts of the river?
Ummmm duh.. yea... since the perspective is forced, it should quite a bit wider....