This is a really nice map!

I'm not too crazy about the mountains either, but I thought I'd see if I could figure out how to explain why before I posted....

To me, they look too much like bumps on top of bumps. Even as rounded mountains, they don't seem to have much of a mountain range structure, just a series of bumps that pretty much all look alike, some bigger some smaller, but otherwise the same. I know you hand drew them, but they appear almost like you had one example that you copied over and over with tiny variations. (I can say this because that's what I did once with hills and got the critique I deserved for it )

That said, I love the rest of your map! The water lines are great, the trees mesh into the mountains beautifully, the rivers run right, and the illustrations and words that tell the stories of the map are absolutely awesome!

Very well done!!
Cornelia