Okay, I have made a few changes, and tried to do a bit more finishing on it. Here's take 2. (Already spotted a few areas where some of the layers bled over, so I'll snag those!)

Things I tried to change:

1 - Ditched the walls over the water. Wasn't necessary
2 - Added a little definition to the ground and water
3 - Reduced scale to lessen scribbles
4 - Adjusted the island piece to be more of an outpost than a full castle

I'd love to hear any other feedback!

Next step: Adjusting colors for snow.

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