WIP - Avearia - Looking for feedback

[kacey]

Hi Diamond, thanx for the nice comments.

uniformity of colour and appearance is exactly why I wanted to do all the line work first then work on the colours. I've tried doing it in pieces before only to find that I've forgotten which brush I used, or what colour or opacity, it's really frustrating, and since I'm sure I'll be spending massive amounts of time on the mountains I'd like it to be as pain free as possible.

I did thin out the coast like you said, I hope I did it thin enough because it definitely took some time, but overall I think it's an improvement. I was hoping to clean up the coast, and I think I accomplished that. Do you think its ok in my latest update, or should I work on it more?

I did decide to keep the rivers as fjords, and I hope to somehow make them look raised a bit, or like there's giant cliffs along the coast or something. I haven't quite worked out yet what I'm going to do, but I'm sure in time I'll figure something out.

Thank you so much for taking the time to draw on top of my map, now hopefully I can do it half as good as you did.

I agree with you whole heartedly about the text, and I will be changing it in the future it's just not at the top of my list right now. I'm not even sure I'm going to keep the title in that corner. We'll see, but if you have any suggestions they would be greatly appreciated.