I must say, Caenwyr, your posts are always a great read I think this: "It's like a game of connect-the-dots, without actually seeing the connecting lines" was a fantastic description. Interesting technique for the rivers too, I'm thinking that would in fact be used for the entire landmass, hmm… might try experimenting with that in ink. Your new mountains are a big improvement, very very nice. Still looks a little too interrupted though, in places, I think; I'm seeing clusters where you have mountains getting progressively bigger, then a break, then it picks up and again gets bigger and bigger. A small peak between the clusters should solve that, if I'm not just seeing things…