Can only agree with Josiah, very fine work on the mountain and hill details Dan! The rivers look much better now imo (more coherent with the lake shore). As i'm struggling a lot with forest representation myself atm, i'm curious to see what style your girlfriend wants for it. What came to my mind while looking at the map again: The outlined forest area seems pretty large in relation to the whole map. Maybe you could break it up along the rivers flowing through, so it isn't like one large "monolithic" blob. Ofc, it's only an idea, that came to me because i like what you have so far, and you said we should say what we think
Cheers,
AL