I was hoping to get some feedback and guidance on changes I should make to my map. I am not the artist (I can't draw a straight line using the line tool in PS), but the artist I commissioned based the map off the example I sent them. I'm fairly certain the river flow is messed up, amongst other things - but I was hoping you all could tell me where to begin. Thank you!

Note: If there are any questions, please feel free to ask.

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