Wow, great first map! I like the overall feel, a little sparse but a good hand drawn feel.

A few thoughts:
- Would be nice to see something to help distinguish water from land, either a hatch or a slight wash.
- Would love to see the signatures as actual signatures and not fonts... If you don't have good handwriting, find a friend who does!
- The shorelines have a pixelated quality, not sure what happened, might have been the brush you used in the stroke?
- Guild is spelled wrong under Margaret Mys