Hi people,

I'm currently working on a commission and the client wants a region devastated by a war. I thought magic, went to some wonderful maps for reference and came up with this.

00Commish - copie.jpg

I intend to add many tiny rocks and terrain details (hope I won't overdo it) and some burning places but the big guns are set. The line work needs cleaning but that won't be a difficult task.

What I'd like to know is what you think of it ? Does the perspective works ok ? Is the composition good enough ? Is the style consistent ?

It's the first time I do broken land like these so I'd like your opinion on this. It won't be a WIP, just a little help asked.

Thanks in advance.

Thomas