I think this is a gorgeous map with an attractive colour palette. The mountains, forests and land shading are beautifully done and the little embellishments like the shields and the title really add to it. My only nitpick is with some of the labelling. I find myself wishing that you'd used curved labels instead of tilted/diagonal ones. For example, The Green Isle label could probably have fitted into the island shape, rather than overlapping the sea, if it were curved. Also, having the label for 'Gray Mountains' curve around the base of the range might have looked nicer too. This really is a minor thing however, but maybe something to think about in future maps. It's a beautiful piece and all the nicer for being your first finished maps. Congrats on that!