The mapwork is very nice. The hard edges on the labeling and border don't look quite right to me against the artwork for the town. It looks like a computer-annotated old map; the white glows on the text done for legibility just scream "image editor". If you did a quick hand-drawn text insert in a non-western language (maybe Chinese saying "chicken soup with dumplings" or some such) then it would make it clear that the annotations were after the fact. If the intent is not to look post-annotated, you might be able to use a small noise-based displacement map on the full-resolution version to roughen up the edges of the text and borders just a little bit.