So, this is my first attempt at a fully finished map - I've always done sketches and things which I've got bored with and abandoned.

These are the islands of Askhatha and Lokh (locally "Askhatha Lokh-so ta Kathom"). I challenged myself not to include any English text on the map, so there's a rather underdeveloped conlang in place. No scale as yet, but I'm imagining an area a few hundred kilometers across.

Askhatha-Lokh-so-ta-Kathom.jpg

Visually, I'm quite happy with the labeling and the colours, but I think the mountains are a little bit blobby and indistinct. I feel like some additional linework (maybe some rhumb lines or similar) would help make it feel less "sketchy". Also, I'd like to add a border and some other paraphernalia like a compass rose.

Thoughts and comments welcome!