I think this is really good, Josiah. You've nailed the fantasy style: it reminds me of some of Max's work, and that's high praise indeed.

I am half in agreement with Mouse about the forests, though: there's something about them that clashes with the rest of the map, but I'm not sure if I agree with her theory that they're too realistic. For me, I think it is simply that you have some huge blocks of forest, and very few little forests, or stray trees. Sure, a stray tree wouldn't be visible at this scale, but it might help to break up the forest edges a little.

Wingshaw
(formerly TheHoarseWhisperer or THW)