I really like every little detail with this map. The one criticism I have is that the overall composition needs to be cleaned up some more to give it a cleaner look. A few lines here and there need to be retouched to improve the overall effect. I know that it's hard to go from extreme detail and have it come out looking great at a farther distance away! Once you do that you'll be in another class of maps, imo. Great work so far!