Hey XCali!

This is turning out to be a really cool map! In fact, there's only one suggestion I can make.

If you were working in CC3+, I would tell you a light glow effect behind your labels would make them stand out a bit more. But you aren't using cc3+ (I don't think), so all I can tell you is that your black lettering is kind of fading into your bluish grays and your browns... with the exception of the fancy lettering for Hunter's Fall. Now someone with perfect eyesight may not see a difference... but someone like me, who's vision either gives me ghost images, or fade outs (if colors blend too well), I can't really see your labels all that much. With the simple, thin line lettering, they need something to help them stand out, just a bit.