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    This map has really blossomed!
    Quite a variety of shops and 'other establishments'.

    A couple of things jumped out at me:
    - the shop in the upper left with the display cases might benefit from a desk and chair for the proprietor.
    - the bakery also looks a little empty; maybe shelves or a table of baked goods waiting for sale or delivery.
    - the leather work shop might benefit from a table and chairs in the front (for cronies to hang out). Or a desk and chair.
    - the two places above the brothel have large empty areas. Carpets might help.

    And most of the buildings only have a single entrance/exit.
    Modern building inspectors would be very upset!

    For the border, I'd be tempted to go with a simple geometry design. The map already contains so many textures...
    Or perhaps a rock border, but with the rocks on a much larger scale than the other textures in the map. And a different color

    I'm liking this map. It's shaping up nicely.
    Last edited by bkh1914; 07-16-2018 at 10:47 PM.

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