I am pretty new to making maps for anyone other than the people I play D&D with, but I wanted some feedback on what I have in the works so far.

Here is my hand drawn version of the Andolf Kingdom, which has a lot more town names and such in it.
Andolf Pencil.jpg

Here is the remake I did using CC3 where I didn't go so crazy on names.
Andolf Kingdom.PNG

Like I said, I was hoping for some feedback on what I have so far. I recently started making D&D campaigns for other people and I want to make sure I am giving the best maps possible.