Hi Pictsy, nice first map! I really like what you've done artistically. The colors are great, and the drawing is much MUCH better than mine was when I started. I especially like the town markers.

Your rivers are doing some unfortunate things though. Specifically, you have them splitting up on their way to the ocean instead of joining. That's ok in certain situations (like a swampy delta) but that doesn't seem to be the case here. There's a great sticky in the tutorial area of the forums called "How to get your rivers in the right place" that can help.