March 2021 Challenge: Thulor WIP

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Salutations! I'm not completely sure that I posted this in the right spot (I've never done a challenge before), so sorry if I got it wrong. But here's the context:

In an alternate dimension where humanity still incorporates Gothic steampunkery (I'm making this up as I go along) into the arts, architecture, and just about every aspect of their lives, the year is 2450 a.d. Mankind started colonizing planets over a century ago, and Thulor is one of them. Possessing everything needed to sustain life, earth jumped at the chance to inhabit such an environment. Now Thulor is a fully autonomous territory with its own language and culture. Even the humans have evolved into slightly more delicate, thin beings with an almost ethereal beauty in both sexes. But all of this bliss is about to be destroyed. Enter the Synaptics, an army of cybernetic automatons created by a Thulorian scientist gone renegade. These monsters are bent on destroying every last shred of humanity in the universe and Thulor is their next target. Already they have made several excursions onto the planet, leaving cities decimated in their wake. But the Thulorians' power isn't enough to overcome these beasts. It's going to take one of the universe's most obscure, intrepid, albeit slightly unconventional heroes to overcome this menace. That's right. They're gonna need a Doctor (sorry, couldn't help myself)

So yeah. Please comment anything that I could do to spice it up.

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