And here's another incremental update. I added another "ringset", and moved some labels around. Also, I took off the names of the kingdoms and replaced them by numbers, and added a tiny legend at the left. Otherwise the map would have looked waaaaay overcrowded.

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Client will now take this version to the publisher and have them make a print proof, so we can flee out any remaining issues (such as illegible labels due to their tiny size). This is exciting!