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Hi Jerett,
Looks quite professional! I like it. No real suggestions from me.
Just have a close look at the bottom left corner of the main floor map. Are the outlines a little off?
Rag's End Orphanage
This map was moved from the Members Introduction forum (my greeting post) to this one in hopes I can get a bit more feedback on it.
It is nearly complete, but I'd really like some feedback on it before I put it to bed.
SRO - Rag-end Orphanage.jpg
Last edited by Jerett L. Schaufele; 01-17-2011 at 09:11 PM. Reason: corrected spelling of thread name
Hi Jerett,
Looks quite professional! I like it. No real suggestions from me.
Just have a close look at the bottom left corner of the main floor map. Are the outlines a little off?
Hi ho, hi ho, it's off to work I go..
Right you are! That does need to be fixed up. Thanks Aval.
Very nice clean map.
The only thing I found confusing is the cellar - It took me a while to figure out where it was physically located as it is offset.
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Yes I would say that it looks better this way. Cleaner and the area of interest is more defined. Also like the new border. Nicely done. One little point about the stairs though. You have to watch out for the shadows. For example, the stairs north of room 12 are obviously going up....but once you get to the landing, the shadows on the second run of stairs should be reversed from those of the lower run. This would give a clearer indication of where the stairs are going. But don't worry overly much, this is a good map and stairs are not always the easiest thing to wrap your head around at times.
I think much rep worthy
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looks great man. keep up the good work.
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