Ruined Buildings covered in Necrotic goo

[smack monkey]

Hey man,

Nice piece with alot of detail, but its difficult to fins the focal point. I'm not really sure what to make of the differentiation between inside and outside, maybe you could knock down some of the lighting inside the building (or outside) to help the viewer see
that they are visibly different areas.

Just my 2 cents!
~J

Thanks for the feedback. I didn't have time to do a lighting pass on this before we played on it and afterward I was onto something else of course. Fortunately we use Maptool, so once the vision blocking is in it helps to define discrete areas a little. Also there is another piece to this map. It is a roof layer that covers the building at the top left. I'll try and dig it out and post it here when time allows. None of that discounts your comment though. You are completely correct in your assertion that it lacks focus. I'll keep that in mind on my next one.