[Region 1][Map 13] Groam - By Torq

[Midgardsormr]

I donthave a legend. There is only one big city, Arkender. The rest are towns. The ones with black dotted lines surrounding the red dots are fortifications. Skulls are places that used to be settlements whose status is now largely unknown to the people of west Groam.

Torq

What about the yellow towns?

[Torq]

What about the yellow towns?

Yes, sorry, that was to denote size. Yellow towns were supposed to be small towns/big villages as opposed to the more established larger towns in red.

Torq

[Avulsion]

There are so many possibilities with the storyline you've created. Excellent work.

As for the map, it is delicious to look at. The only changes I would suggest are to include a scale, and the yellow/green font is difficult to read in the mountainous/forested areas. Perhaps use a white font border instead of grey for those words? Also, make sure all the words are closer to right side up than upside down. For example, "The New Wall" is more upside down. Several of your names might be turned slightly more horizontal, IMO.

Sorry if I sound picky...