October / November Lite Mapping Challenge: The Blood Trail of the White Hand

[Carbus]

Hey guys, so its been a while since I did anything in cartography, so to give some motivation, Im entering this challenge.
The story will follow up in the lower part of the map. The map is about the justicer know as White Hand, and his vengeance quest against the Kingdom of Taramas. The line shows the path of the White Hand, and the officers and supporters of the kingdom that he kills.

Its still a WIP, so there is a lot of room for improvements.

### LATEST WIP ###
whitehand.jpg

[arsheesh]

Ooh, this already looks very good. I'll be watching this one.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[Carbus]

Sup Guys.
So the map is almost finished, the actual map I consider it done, only the story remains to be written. Also changed the Title, since Im basing the names in Spanish, it made more sense to give the "White Hand" a proper spanish name!
Hope you guys like.
### LATEST WIP ###
whitehand2.jpg

[cfds]

I am missing an indication of direction of this map.
And there seems to be a mistake in the legend (or the White Hand really hates a certain black bird) "Crow" vs "Crown". Is a captain outranked by a sergeant in Spanish speaking armies?

But apart from these little things it is really, really good.