I love the blue background, but I'm with Max, the crimson tittle rubs me the wrong way. Personally I think the two-tone image is much cleaner.
Cheers,
-Arsheesh
I love the blue background, but I'm with Max, the crimson tittle rubs me the wrong way. Personally I think the two-tone image is much cleaner.
Cheers,
-Arsheesh
Alright - after playing with a few things, I agree that it is a bit intense, so I'm back to this varient, with the blue adjusted a bit:
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Think I'll call it done unless there are any other suggestions or crits?
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Not really - I think it looks great and I like the blueprint style you settled on.
Pink? It may blend better with the blueprint color, but it doesn't exactly say, "Arr! Surrender yer ledgers or prepared to be boarded!" does it? If not blood, I'd think they'd want to at least evoke red ink. This says "baby shower" to me.
I agree with rdanhenry. I prefer the red crimson, rather than the pink. Either that or no color at all.
Now where can I get a full-sized poster version of this? Hmmmm?
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Gpig
OK - I'm going for a real crimson - just worked a bit of texture into it.
This should be the end.
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@gpig - what size poster?
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Nicely done Rob, I REALLY need to find a way to use this some how...
BTW, the Battle deck has an error in the room description; I believe you need to switch the write-up for 2 and 4.....unless there is a HUGE amount of exposed ammo storage on the starbord side and only one cabinet bay......
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I don't see it.... Are you looking at D the battle Deck or 3 the Bureaucracy? (The floor labels are below the floors....could be clearer, I guess... maybe label from top to bottom rather than bottom to top?)Originally Posted by Korash
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He, like me read the description for the battle deck and looked at the map for the bureaucracy deck.
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It is a human factors issue - don't blame yourself. Having the ledgend for the one floor adjacent to the map makes it confusingHe, like me read the description for the battle deck and looked at the map for the bureaucracy deck.
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