Lordan-Map commission

[Domino44]

A map I did for a RPG game.

Any criticism, comments, or suggestions are always welcome!

Lordan2.jpg

[Chick]

Very nice, Domino44

I might suggest a stronger tone difference between the land and water. Color difference would be better, but since you have kept the same general color throughout, see if you can make a little more contrast between the tones. The places you put a lighter tone (Aspor and Zham, for example) stand out by far the best. The rest seems too drab to me.

Cheers,
Cornelia

[arsheesh]

Very smooth and appealing to the eye.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[Domino44]

Thanks Chick, I am always trying out new styles so all input I get is really helpful.

Thanks Arsheesh! I'm glad you liked it!

[Ilanthar]

Nice map Domino!

[Domino44]

Thanks Ilanthar, you are always saying something encouraging!

[tainotim]

Great work Domino! Very nice city icons, were they your own design? The only critique I have is concerning the mountains. I don't really think their "sketchy" style fits with the sharp style that you use for the rest of the map.

And congratulations on the commission

Cheers,
Tainotim

[J.Edward]

It may be a style choice on your part, which is fine, but I would suggest this.
I think you could get more punch out of it with some areas being a bit lighter and more contrasted.
It would make things stand out more. But that's just a style choice. It really has an aged quality to it. I like your city icons too.

[Domino44]

Thanks Tainotim! Yes the icons are my own, I get what your saying about the mountains, I'm not in love with them but my client seemed to really like them so I didn't feel the need to change them.

J.Edward, that is a great point the map would look better with a bit of contrast looking at it I do get a sort of flat feeling I will try and create a map that stands out a little more. Thanks for your input and kind words!