Map of the Planes (Redo)

[Ilanthar]

Some more work and an attempt to do a city. I fear the central part may be too crowded with stuff... What do you think?
AT Planes.jpg

[ChickPea]

This is looking great! Really interested to see it come together.

[Ilanthar]

Thanks ChickPea! I'm working on the elements for this zone. I think I'll need to make it less crowded anyway.

[Diamond]

I guess it depends on how much you're going to label. If you use the right font and lay out the text in a good way, you can cram even more stuff in than you already have and still make it readable.

[Ilanthar]

Well, I won't put labels on the planes features, just the planes names and logos... But I want to do it as in my first post. And for that particular region, there's a lot of overlapping things. As you can see in my picture below. And I haven't done all the planes yet.
AT Planes.jpg

[Diamond]

It doesn't look overcrowded at all right now. Of course, my opinion is subject to change.

[ChickPea]

Looking good to me and I don't feel it looks at all crowded either. This is such a great concept!

[Ilanthar]

Thanks! I'll keep it this way then... and change it if it become too crowded.

Here are some more details on the same zone. I tried "fog" and thunders.
AT Planes.jpg

[Francissimo]

i can't wait to see the final version of this one! the theme is great ,and it looks like you're going to offer us a mix of your sci fi style and fantasy maps

[Diamond]

I like the lightning one. What are the two little additions on the main plane?