Stonerang - First City Map

[Brand]

Okay, I have made a few changes, and tried to do a bit more finishing on it. Here's take 2. (Already spotted a few areas where some of the layers bled over, so I'll snag those!)

Things I tried to change:

1 - Ditched the walls over the water. Wasn't necessary
2 - Added a little definition to the ground and water
3 - Reduced scale to lessen scribbles
4 - Adjusted the island piece to be more of an outpost than a full castle

I'd love to hear any other feedback!

Next step: Adjusting colors for snow.

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[Kiba]

Yep, that's looking very pre-winter--scraped out and dead.

I also like the new layout!

[Brand]

Thanks!

I've added some snow to the plains and hills, and tried washing out the colors of the town a little bit.

Next, I'll try to make some progress on the water, and fix that bottom right island (Not sure why he's a little screwy).

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