like it and it looks great
i can not draw anymore - by hand , do to a broken neck in 1989
so i normally do not comment to much , unless i like it
the mountain hugging rivers stand out to me and the one in the south has a second one merging oddly ???
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the one in the north ( BLUE) looks to be going up hill in one part and on a slope for the rest
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Hi there,
I really like the mixed pen and pencil. It adds some lovely shade to the otherwise hard lines. I've had a go at mixing pen and pencil in the past, and the results sometimes can work out really well on a map.
A few other people have mentioned that the rivers don't (quite) seem to make sense. Rivers very seldom have multiple mouths, and if they do it tends to be an esturine area all sort of lumped together.
The other thing that jumps out as me is the ratio of the number of named regions and cities gives the impression of city states or warring petty kingdoms, small factional areas. That might just be an illusion of not putting in every minor town, but that's just the feeling I had off the map.
Great work
Chris
I've made a few suggestions to your rivers, I hope you don't mind. Now, I'm no expert about the flow of rivers, mind you, I've just drawn simple lines in Paint (guuuh, tell me about it! Sadly, I don't have PS on this computer) where I think it's plausible for rivers to flow and at the same time keep your current rivers as intact as possible.
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The blue ring up in the north is my way of drawing your attention to the fact that you could probably let the river either flow to the West or to the South, but unless there's a man made channel up there, the river probably wouldn't divide itself that way.
The Red lines is me erasing a part of a river and the Green lines is my suggestions of how the river could flow.
Like I said, I'm no expert, and there's probably people around here that knows a ton more than me about this sort of things that could chip in here. What do the rest of you lot have to say about my suggestions?