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    Oh yeah, the cliff looks fantastic now! Great job on that. Am interested to see what you do with the fields/cliff top area, but this is turning out incredibly well.
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    Looking great. Lots of nice details.

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    Well, I'm at a point where I need some advice.

    I need some more eyes. I think I'm missing stuff, but I don't know what.

    I added crops and gardens, wells, hitching posts, features on the cliff (including a mysterious ancient henge circle), smoke, a clothesline, and much more terrain detail. I think I went WAY overboard on the image scale--the finished file is actually 1.5 gbs, and I can't upload it in a way that shows off the detail... The darn thing is too big even when I shrink it down to save as a jpg. <sigh> Honestly, I don't know of any image hosting services that will let a person view the 72mb jpg... hehe... WAY too many layers... <sigh>...

    But anyway. I know I'm missing stuff. Anything stick out to you all as really odd? Color balance? Texture? Whatever?

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    I'm hoping this image is a little bigger...


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    Excellent map! The work you did on that cliff is impressive.

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    The thing that sticks out the most to me is that there is no bridge in westbridge. Unless the name refers to the town being west of a bridge some distance away. Also the building with the boxes in the yard in the northeast of the map - are they beehives?

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    Yeah, there's no bridge in Westbridge. Not my fault--the pre-written campaign setting I'm making it for doesn't locate it on a river but instead on a major trade thoroughfare. In my head, I justified it the same way you did, Larb--it's a "gateway to the west", and I tried to imply that through the "The East Stops Here" subtitle...

    And those beehives are supposed to be chicken coops for a poulterer. But now that you've mentioned beehives, I'm wondering if I shouldn't have some of those too somewhere... hehe...

    Uploaded the image to my stash on DeviantArt to get the full image. Heres' the link: http://sta.sh/05f7jsj3jdh
    Last edited by Coreyartus; 07-25-2015 at 03:06 PM.

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    Where is the bridge?

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    Yeah, Galendae--there is no bridge. It's the "Bridge to the West". No river in the pre-written campaign material (Princes of the Apocalypse) that I'm using for my D&D game, for which I'm developing this map... Blame Mike Schley--he's the one who developed the original regional map under direction from WotC and Sasquatch Studios! Haha!!

    I'm sure the irony isn't lost on the local populace!

    So I added a key to the map and adjusted some stuff. Thoughts?

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    Looks good to me. The only typo I see is grainery instead of granary. I don't see any others. And now I've seen the regional map the town name makes sense!

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