Wow, this turned out very appealing ChickPea! I like the color palette and the overall layout a lot. The tales about the water spirits are fantstic, and thanks for the useful tips on how to deal with them!Looking at the thumbnail, the area behind the mountain range seems a bit too red compared to the foreground in my view. Keep up the great work!
Cheers,
AL
Could it be that your general dissatisfaction arise from the mismatch between the map and the tales? The map looks very good and the selected folklore is awesome, but I can't see how they connect. For instance, Seonaidh legend mentions the Isle of Lewis, but no island appears on the map, another legend mentions a strait, but there's none drawn..
Yes, this is certainly part of it. It was my intention to add little pictorial icons relating to each of the legends, but I find that I'm losing interest .... :/Originally Posted by Pixie
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The new mountains really help and I think it looks great. But if you are feeling it needs more, then there is a lot of blank sky to play with. Clouds, an illustration, perhaps a large title shield.
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Thanks, Bogie.
I'm going to stick a big title in the top centre area and call it done. I did a bad thing and started working on a new map instead....!
"We are the music makers, and we are the dreamers of dreams"
Yeah, I definitely feel you on that.
...and that.I did a bad thing and started working on a new map instead....!
But I like it! Since you fixed that left-side river the perspective looks great.
For the sake of completeness, I'm posting my final update on this, though all I've really done is add a title. I might go back to this one of these days and redo it, but I'm done for now.
Note to self: think things through and plan a little before you dive in feet first!
### Latest WIP ###
waterways.jpg
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Now it looks complete, Nice!
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Well, except for one thing
It's a very pretty picture, but it needs a compass. A cartography professor once said, "It's not a map unless it has a compass. Without a compass, it's just a pretty picture".
Personally I'd love to see some connection between the stories and the picture, too. Without any connection, it's just a set of nice tales printed on the edges of a pretty picture.
It's a very nice job, Chickpea, and I know you have other interests, but those two things could be very simple and quick to do, and together they would turn a very pretty picture into a very nice map!
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