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Thread: Nov/Dec 2015 Challenge: The Defiled Temple

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    Oh wow, that's about a hundred times better than it was before! The ground cover looks great. Only slight thing I noticed was with the graves to the top left. The edges of the middle and right graves look like they need a little more blending. But apart from that, it's looking really good.
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    Thanks ChickPea, The grass texture is from Hero339 at DeviantArt, one of my faves. Good catch on the graves, that does need to be blended better.

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    Graves fixed, Title added, New border. Done.

    Long had the Priests and Paladins of the Temple of Gilgeam defended the borderlands of the Yuirwood. With the power of their god behind them they were always victorious.
    Suddenly, without explanation, that power stopped. The priests lost their spells, the paladins faltered. Seizing the opportunity, the followers of Velsharoon, Lord of the Forgotten Crypt, overwhelmed them. Since the temple was strategically located, they took it as their own and it is now known as The Defiled Temple.

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    Looks great!
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    Nice work, my friend!

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    Thanks Diamond, one last change and this should be the final post, unless someone finds something that needs fixing.

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    too cluttered and the grass needs cutting...might be time to hire a new grounds keeper
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    Quote Originally Posted by jpstod View Post
    too cluttered and the grass needs cutting...might be time to hire a new grounds keeper
    The paladins had kept the grounds nice and neat, the rabid followers of the necromancer god are not concerned with having a pretty lawn.

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