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    I agree with Neyjour. This is a very lovely map indeed. The colors remind me a little of a watercolor piece. Impressive work for having been accomplished in such a short period of time.

    I'd also agree with Neyjour about the font though. It doesn't seem to compliment the style/subject matter of the map. Dido for those end-border caps, I think hand drawn border caps would have been more in keeping with the overall style. Otherwise great work.

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neyjour View Post
    What a pretty map! I love the tilted perspective, the colour scheme, and how Tenru Watch island sits right in the center of the compass lines. I also really like how the compass lines are messy/sketchy. Don't think I've seen them drawn like that before, and it looks great!

    If I had to be nit-picky about anything, it would be that the font is a tad bit plain. But other than that, everything looks wonderful. Beautiful work!
    Thanks so much Neyjour!
    I thought those compass lines looked too crisp and digital so I added a glass effect and I loved how it worked.
    Hmm, I always have trouble with font. Thanks for the feedback.

    Quote Originally Posted by thomrey View Post
    That's fantastic Josiah ! Composition, linework and what a color theme ! It's a gem ! The only thing I can think of as a small critic would be that this style would have worked well with a little more ... substance, for lack of a better word, for the coastline. It lacks a little bit of depth as is. But it's a tiny detail, the map is really amazing !

    And the backstory of the different location is the cherry on top of the cake
    Thanks Thomas!
    In what way more substance? Not really sure what you mean.

    Quote Originally Posted by arsheesh View Post
    I agree with Neyjour. This is a very lovely map indeed. The colors remind me a little of a watercolor piece. Impressive work for having been accomplished in such a short period of time.

    I'd also agree with Neyjour about the font though. It doesn't seem to compliment the style/subject matter of the map. Dido for those end-border caps, I think hand drawn border caps would have been more in keeping with the overall style. Otherwise great work.

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh
    Thanks Arsheesh.
    Yeah, I definitely think the border caps need to go.
    I didn't spend a lot of time on the text and other finishing touches, I was trying to finish it up quickly.

    And thanks for the rep everyone!

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