Ivorell Revisited

[Mouse]

Excellent work!

I can't see anything that could be done better

[ThomasR]

Glad to see another piece in this style from you. You really are a master in this matter

[Blaidd Drwg]

Thanks all! I've decided to leave it as it is and move on to something else. I might still try to colour the lineart by hand as well. I don't want my watercolours to feel useless

The mountains are a bit flat without too much shading, but if you're just trying not to attract attention away from the valley, that's good.
Great job!

I'm assuming you mean the mountains in the background. Their flatness is indeed deliberate, but more to make them look distant (atmospheric perspective). I do wonder if the transition between middle and background isn't too sudden. Something to keep in mind in future works =)