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    Okay, now you've really taken this to the next level - that looks great. Since you've made it up like a brochure, I'd suggest toning down the white areas to better blend with the 'paper' they're on. Maybe put a light parchment-y wash over them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Diamond View Post
    Okay, now you've really taken this to the next level - that looks great. Since you've made it up like a brochure, I'd suggest toning down the white areas to better blend with the 'paper' they're on. Maybe put a light parchment-y wash over them.
    Ah, excellent idea. Thanks, Diamond!

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    This is a good looking map, and I like the brochure presentation quite a lot as well. Great idea!

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    Thank you all for the feedback throughout the month! It really helped me elevate the map from something very basic to what I've got now. There are a few minor things I need to clean up but I'm happy with how it looks!

    ### Latest WIP ###
    Final Abbey Brochure Color (smaller).jpg

    And here's my random generator:
    July Mapping Challenge.jpg

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    This is such a rad idea! Looks like a great start to a one-page dungeon entry...
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    Quote Originally Posted by anomiecoalition View Post
    This is such a rad idea! Looks like a great start to a one-page dungeon entry...
    Thanks! Now that it's mapped out, I am totally going to use the Abbey as a dungeon in an upcoming campaign.

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    Crazy week, only got to fix one thing. But this has been an amazing first challenge! I've really enjoyed it and appreciated all of the comments.

    ### Latest WIP ###
    Final Abbey Brochure Color (v4).jpg

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