Love your style, very nice job!
Home of burglars, bandits, pickpockets, brigands, thieves, crooks, swinders, looters, highwaymen, and any other kind of criminal you can imagine.
Many more maps to come. Enjoy.
Last edited by 7legionarmy; 10-18-2017 at 01:45 AM. Reason: Updated the Map
"Aye, it should have been the Year of the Four Rebellions, but the blood of my people thins every generation. The Men of Iron rust because our fathers abandoned the true born daughters of the Will of Iron for their Rust Wives."
Derik Moonhand
Love your style, very nice job!
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"Aye, it should have been the Year of the Four Rebellions, but the blood of my people thins every generation. The Men of Iron rust because our fathers abandoned the true born daughters of the Will of Iron for their Rust Wives."
Derik Moonhand
Wow. Gorgeous. At first I thought it looked a bit full / cluttered but I was wrong. I love the zoom-ins and the art. I think there are a few naming issues, but I would read these books just to be able to use the maps!
"Aye, it should have been the Year of the Four Rebellions, but the blood of my people thins every generation. The Men of Iron rust because our fathers abandoned the true born daughters of the Will of Iron for their Rust Wives."
Derik Moonhand
Wonderful work, 7legionarmy! Really dig the style, colors, and details!
Naming issues is the first thing I had in mind, too. Especially the bend ones feel wobbly, as if they were rotated and placed by hand. Maybe try to align them along a path to get this the crisp perfection this illustrative map truly deserves!
Again, wonderful work! Rep! =)
Best wishes, Steffen
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Last edited by 7legionarmy; 10-22-2017 at 02:23 PM.
"Aye, it should have been the Year of the Four Rebellions, but the blood of my people thins every generation. The Men of Iron rust because our fathers abandoned the true born daughters of the Will of Iron for their Rust Wives."
Derik Moonhand
Ok next map.
"Aye, it should have been the Year of the Four Rebellions, but the blood of my people thins every generation. The Men of Iron rust because our fathers abandoned the true born daughters of the Will of Iron for their Rust Wives."
Derik Moonhand
The straight names look... too straight, in comparison to some of the words which are VERY curved. The large variation in letter-spacing is also confusing. In general you should have certain items have a matching look (all roads, streets, paths; all towns, villages, cities; forests; mountains and mountain ranges; specific buildings/locations) in terms of spacing, alignment, curvature.
I also understand the desire to have the Loop and the Barrel be written circular in which case it should read "Looters Loop" and "Barters Barrel" rather than "Looters ԀOO˥" and "Barters ˥Ǝɹɹ∀q" OR have both words together on top or bottomCode:And, for example, "T h e T h i e v e s T h r e a d" instead of "The Thieves Thread"
The spacing for "The Lion's Main" also looks odd. see Thieves Thread
"Aye, it should have been the Year of the Four Rebellions, but the blood of my people thins every generation. The Men of Iron rust because our fathers abandoned the true born daughters of the Will of Iron for their Rust Wives."
Derik Moonhand