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    That road looks much better now. I like the pumpkin addition as well.

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    Very nice. I find myself wondering though if the smoke shouldnt have so noticeable a change in direction, as it heads for a very short distance south and then sharply east? It also seems afraid to leave the confines of the rooftops, especially on the building on the left, giving more the impression of mist clinging to a mountaintop than smoke billowing from a chimney. Part of it might be that I think you might want the smoke a touch more grey and/or transparent than allowing it to be an almost solid misty white.

    That said, its a really minor thing. I love all the other details.

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    Next and maybe final update.

    Tried to clear up all grass issues by either adding the last missing fences or soften up the borders (e.g at the smithy) and added the last missing building.

    I really planned to add some leaves on the roads but I dont think I'll finish my script in time.

    About the smoke... Yeah it gives me headaches for sure. I am still figuring out how I could do them better If I find a solution by tomorrow, I will add more smoke and change the existing one.

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