Dukori [WIP] - Feedback appreciated

[ninjawarrior5224]

This is a map for a region in the world I use when running campaigns in Pathfinder. This is my first ever attempt at creating a map and I was loosely following the guide for the artistically challenged that I found on this site. I made the map in Photoshop and the parchment effect didn't quite come out right but I plan on working on it some more tonight when I get home.

The map feels a bit empty to me but I didn't want to make it too busy either. Any feedback you can give me would be much appreciated as I want to make it as awesome as possible for my players.

Thanks!

Dukori.png

[Ilanthar]

Looks pretty good to me!
I would just use a drawn line for the coasts, maybe, to match the other drawn elements.
Some of the hatching of the mountains are also a bit blurry in my eye.